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A lonely soul trapped in a body
It ash to fly to a heavenly sight
Why is that?
I will tell you why........




Years ago this pure soul was chosen to live as human; the poor little soul was so naive.
It believes human life would be simple and heavenly.
The pure soul begins its life as human male chosen by his people to guide them to the victory.
The poor naive soul though this was a simple and noble task for he should lead them to the right path.
He lead his people to the battle and for the first time he found himself doubting, he doubt his choice for being human as he look at his people slaying and killing their own brothers.
He stop there and wonder, is that what humans do? killing each other, shedding their own blood for power.
Children, women, men were killed in cold blood ,no one was spared.
And who led to their death?
It was the soul.



Weep no more you lonely soul
For your choice was disastrous
But fear no more for you are forgiven
After all curiosity killed the men
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This is the first short story/poem kinda thing I have ever did , so please tell me your opinion.:iconomgomgemoteplz:


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:iconjoe-maccer:
I like it. Good thoughts Cecy. :clap:
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:iconcecy1:
Thank you Joe :iconbowplz:
And thanks for the favorite :iconflowerrainplz:
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